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" Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little" - Holley Gerth

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Idek… I just started writing. I kinda strayed a little from the prompt but oh well. Any feedback would be great!

The Unknown

May 16, 2018

PROMPT: The Unknown

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A void of endless darkness lurks beneath the world
The truth deeply hidden and always to be furled
A crack within the foundation allows me to peer in
I see the world anew, shed of lying skin
A world of longed for answers
A world glutted with cancers
A world of hopes and dreams
A world swamped with screams
Filled with darkness, hate, and fear
Light no longer shines here
Left with rotting flesh and cloudy eyes
A hollowed heart and ache for demise
For the curiosity etched in my bone
I was taken by the unknown 


 
 

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  • RainAndSonder

    I was really impressed by this! Your descriptions are great and I like the rhythm of the poem. Great work!


    2 months ago