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Little do they know

May 13, 2018

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"You look kinda pale, are you sick?"
Little do they know, you spent yesterday madly smashing bricks
"You look tired, did you get enough sleep last night?"
Little do they know, all night you stayed up seeking the light
"Let her be, she's sleeping."
Little do they know, you spent the night weeping
"Smiles! Smiles! Smiles! Smiles!"
Little do they know, you tried but with failing trials
"Goodness, why are you always looking down?"
Little do they know, you formed a barrier with the next door town
"What's wrong with your eyes?!"
Little do they know, how hard you're trying to mute your cries


 

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2 Comments
  • rainandsonder

    This is really deep. Great work!


    over 2 years ago
  • camlily

    ok... this is exactly what happened to me on Friday. I cried so hard the night before, got no sleep... the next day, everyone was asking me if I was okay. I blamed the redness around my eyes on allergies. This is a wonderful piece and I could completely relate to it! Great job, and keep writing!


    over 2 years ago