Hong Kong

~on an indeterminate hiatus~


May 13, 2018

Take a deep breath...

You are standing in a field 
of tickly tallgrass
Holding up a small, delicate daisy in your
small, delicate hand
Your nose brushing against the yellow dots in the centre
Kind of like the yellow polka dots on your white dress

A big, black, gigantic labrador
Lots of fluff and fur
Rolling around and panting, tongue hanging out
from its jagged canines
Running toward you now
You find yourself on the grass 
Blue sky
Feeling the warm saliva ooze onto your face
A pink, burry tongue flicking up your cheeks
You laugh and hug it

Breathe out...

Now you're here again
Those same green trees
that used to gently lull you to sleep
still crackle in the breeze,
As if they welcomed you back
into a household of simpler times...


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  • nezi_nes

    Haha interesting comparison! Thanks so much, you guys encourage me to write more :)

    about 2 years ago
  • RedWriter

    Amazing! I am lovin' it more than McDonalds.
    But really, this is great. I feel so good reading it and the bitterness we must all feel by now comes out of the blue.

    about 2 years ago
  • nezi_nes


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    about 2 years ago
  • nezi_nes

    Guys... I am so honoured by what y'all say you are so kind, I was literally fangirling inside when reading your comments!

    about 2 years ago
  • aggressivebackflip

    dis so good... my man.. you bringin tears to my eyes...

    about 2 years ago
  • omicron7889

    This is beautifully written I can practically feel the melancholy from my computer screen.

    about 2 years ago