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Anything guys. From how it is written (shakespearian language) to the very matter of the words
My favorite line has to be "For a stitch placed in time,
a stitch upon his artistic talent gone." Beautiful. And, yes, I guess that was two lines, but they're amazing!
The strength added to this wonderful piece by the subject of time was marvelous. I liked how it wasn't really about Time, but it was at the same moment.
"Time is Not on Thou Side" is a marvelous piece, complete with the pleasures of Shakespeare's writing and characters, memorable lines, and the subject of time, all wrapped together in a tasty bundle!
You did a truly wonderful job writing this! Keep it up!