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The line where he plots evil, obviously! I have to admit, I was surprised by that.
Intrigue. I want to find out more.
Great work! This was an interesting introduction to a future subplot, although there were a few confusing places. Also, technically it's not a backstory because it takes place after the canon, not before it, so I'd change the title. Other than that, nice job!