If a particle of your observations tugs at you a certain way, don't forget to write it down.
I know this isn't exactly what the prompt asked for, but I think I turned Claire into a living person in this
story, that is told through the eyes of her older sister, so I don't think it matters. This is a character I created
over a year ago, and have never decided what I wanted to do with her. But because I wanted Claire to become
more alive, I wrote this as a necessary exercise. I honestly don't want any feedback on the structure; I really like
this story as it is, however, if there are any grammar mistakes that I missed or suggestions to make the character
stronger, I would love to hear your advice. Thanks for reading!
Written By: Josephine O'Grady
November 27, 2015