Everyday I write (and write). From little one scene stories to huge essays, I am always writing something. Apart from writing, I spend my time researching different times and places in history. :)
First, thanks for reading my writing! If you would like to review, please just refrain from being completely rude about the piece. I would like honest, blunt feedback, but just don't say something that is not helpful to improving the writing. Also, if there is a grammatical mistake, you can notify me about it, but if it is an error that is adding to the story, don't worry about it. I probably already know about it! Thanks again, sorry for going on for so long!
Written By: Belle Morris
September 24, 2014
Siblings, Abigail Luisella, age 12 & Benjamin Warren, age 15, from Concord Massachusetts, leather satchel contents:
-$38.69, in all American currencies ranging from colonial pounds to 2014 bills
-a spiral notebook, filled with names and birthdays
-a vegetarian's cookbook
- pocket Jeopardy!
-acne cream -a black and white mini portrait, circa. 1883 -a 2009 Blackberry -a slip of paper with the letters, I, L, and C written on it -a worn copy of Back to the Future
I combined two characters I have been dabbling with, since they are, in fact, brother and sister, and this satchel holds equally Abigail's things, as Benjamin's, so I grouped them together.