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Message to Readers
I think our society now lacks the joy of simplicity. I hope that future generations don't forget it.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
Yes, by so beautifully showing the future reader what is disappearing from our modern world and asking them to hold on to our past you created a beautifully balanced piece.
I think the future reader will be excited to read about their past and learn things that were important to the writer.