camlily

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hi there

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what up fam I’m back from like a four month break
most of my pieces are really personal so yeah I’m sorry if you read any of them
been here since 2017 with my besties FairNoble and CreativeAngel <3
just a girl trying to get rid of writers block
I hope that you have an absolutely splindiferous day! :)
If y'all want me to check out a piece or peer review it, let me know in the comments of one of my pieces and I'll do my best to get it done

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- courtesy of SamG95 (im actually not sure if he's on here anymore but... he made this)

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Truth Serum

April 18, 2018

FREE WRITING

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I wish there was a potion created for truth
That for genuine facts it would sleuth
And I could promise my friends that I speak in sooth.  

I'd drink this truth serum, constraint my mind
I'd tell them they were pretty, smart, and kind.
And they'd believe me, truth and passion combined.  

But no such potion has been created-
And so trust only we have been fated.  
You all deserve true complements, long belated.  

So, dear friends, I beg you so-
Please, discontinue your tales of woe.  

I am speaking the truth, so hear me out-
You all are beautiful, intelligent, inside and out.  
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This was a bad poem I created for my friends, because they are all putting themselves down. If you're reading this right now, go hop on to CreativeAngel's profile and show her some love!!!! Thank you guys so so so much <3

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12 Comments
  • camlily

    aww <3


    almost 2 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Truth is..

    I think we’re about to find out a lot of boys like you
    Idk if I want to add more
    I don’t know anything
    I just have this feeling
    New year new courage
    New bravery
    New people
    But never a new bestie<3


    almost 2 years ago
  • rainandsonder

    It's not a bad poem at all! It's actually pretty good.


    over 2 years ago
  • camlily

    XD YES I NEED THAT!!


    over 2 years ago
  • Johanna

    Veritaserum


    over 2 years ago
  • Deleted User

    This is AMAZING!


    over 2 years ago
  • Kati

    I really like this poem--it can be so frustratingly true at times!


    over 2 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    GIMME DA LOVEE


    over 2 years ago
  • Gabriel Goodwin

    This was good though!!! Don't put yourself down for a good poem :-(

    Oh and also this... :D https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/63495/version/124571


    over 2 years ago
  • camlily

    As I’m reading the footnotes, it does sound like i intentionally made a bad poem for them. I tried to make it good; it just didn’t work out I guess.


    over 2 years ago
  • camlily

    Because I’m not very good at writing at poetry, so anything i wrote would have been bad. I tried… :’(


    over 2 years ago
  • GeoPlayer123YT

    why didn't you make a good poem for your friends?


    over 2 years ago