ollieollie

United States of America

Um......hi

Over the past year, I defeated a fear of other people, learned the value of clarity and brevity, fought writer's block, and developed pride in my words.

Now I am a writer with a love for onomatopoeias and an affinity for semicolons.

Message to Readers

My friend and I are both very uncoordinated.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Shoes

April 17, 2018

PROMPT: Walking

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He walks quickly, for dawdling is not a virtue he was raised in. One of his hands is helping him illustrate the wild story he's telling, the other is gripping a worn violin case. He's laughing. If he were uncomfortable, he would be looking down at his shoes. But instead he's smiling, and he's facing the sun. He goes down the stairs two at a time. If he realized he was performing an action that required coordination, he would fall. He's too absorbed in his tale to notice, though, and reaches the bottom step without issue.

​You laugh and tell him to slow down. His legs are longer than yours.

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