Peer Review by averageteenwriter (United States)

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A Choice

By: Marerider


PROMPT: 25 Words

I stand on a precipice (figuratively speaking). Do I jump? Take the chance? Trust them?
‚ÄčOr do I stay on firm ground? Safe... but alone...


Message to Readers

Any and all thoughts welcome! Please let me know what you think!


Peer Review

I loved the line "I stand on a precipice" because it really gives the reader a solid mental image.


They deal mainly with tangible things to allow readers to insinuate their own ideas.


Reviewer Comments

Keep writing! I look forward to your next work!