Puja Shah


Message to Readers

This is just an idea for a story. The guy is supposed to be the one who manipulates (fantasy element) the narrator to shoot the girl. I’d like to know if you’d read a story with a scene like this, and if there is potential. Also, what could I have wrtitten better? Thank you.


October 2, 2018

PROMPT: 25 Words

The symphony of his voice was delightful. Rich, and warm, and soothing. His eyes, the green abyss, almost hypnotic. I shoot. She screams. He smiles.

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  • Puja Shah

    Thank you SamG953! Is this competition on WtW or someplace else?

    about 1 year ago
  • No More Than Sam

    You should submitted this into the #darkness competition. It's awesome

    about 1 year ago