Angelina Nguyen

Australia

"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing."
-Benjamin Franklin

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Hello, everyone! I hope you enjoy my pieces published on this page! Most of what I write is inspired by real life events, along with people I have the pleasure of meeting. Please favourite, review, leave a comment or share any of my works if you like them because it may not seem like it but it means a great deal to me and will make my day tremendously.

The Drifting of a Shadow

April 12, 2018

PROMPT: 25 Words

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In his arms, a bouquet of chrysanthemum resided. Shiragiku, the flowers of grief. His eyes were saturating into tears. The conductor blasted a deafening cue.

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5 Comments

  • Angelina Nguyen

    Thank you for all the lovely comments! And thank you for pointing out the phrasing for me, Shanti :D I edited it on my full length story which I will post some time in the next few weeks once it's been polished up.


    almost 3 years ago

  • Shanti

    This is so great, Angelina! I would maybe change the phrasing to "His eyes were saturated with tears" but that's just a tiny detail.


    almost 3 years ago

  • Peppermint Lemonade

    Wonderful job Angelina! I love it!


    almost 3 years ago

  • Gabriel Goodwin

    I can't stop crying, why is that...? This is amazing~


    almost 3 years ago

  • Riley Noel

    *Sobbing noise* This is beautiful!!


    almost 3 years ago