camlily

United States of America

hi, my name is camryn, and i like your hair :)

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If you appear in my notifications, I'll be in yours.
If y'all want me to check out a piece or peer review it, let me know in the comments of one of my pieces and I'll do my best to get it done :)
I follow everyone no matter what. I always give likes back, follow back, and I try to peer review back!

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- courtesy of SamG95 (im actually not sure if he's on here anymore but... he made this)

(also, feel free to add me on sc; cam_lily119)

sunrise

April 10, 2018

FREE WRITING

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a splash of yellow,
surrounding a golden orb
angelic in form.

then a bright orange,
the beautiful fantasy
so dear to our hearts.

and finally, red
with so many "oohs" and ahhs"
the grand finale.

Apollo's mission 
is never done;
we watch the sky 
and the rising sun.  
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There are three haikus in this poem, so it was a lot harder to write than it looks.  I kind of went rogue with the last stanza, it's not a haiku, although it does rhyme. And it's kind of terrible because GUYS I HAVENT WRITTEN ANYTHING IN SO LONG IM SORRY AHH AND THAT EXCLUSION OF APOSTROPHES... also, I have an announcement... 




























I may not be doing Shoutout Saturday as regularly, because I really don't have enough time (it really does take me a while to make the shoutouts).  I'm trying to juggle a blog, NaNoWriMo, my sports, and school. When I'm trying to do all that, I con't write as many poems, short stories, etc. on this website.  So I'm going to try to concentrate more on posting non-shoutout things, and I really hope you guys understand.  I will, however, be posting shoutouts whenever I can.  Please don't throw rotten tomatoes or any fruits at me... peace out.





Have a wonderful day!!

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5 Comments
  • CreativeAngel

    And you say you can't write..

    You definitely can!


    over 1 year ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    This was really well written! Good job!

    ...Also, I'm not sure if you are aware of this, but here:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/63707/version/121736


    over 1 year ago
  • camlily

    Thank you so much *~.Audrey.~*!!!!!!!!!!!! <3


    over 1 year ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    Beautiful! I loved this piece!


    over 1 year ago
  • camlily

    And guys I am trying, TRYING to finish those peer reviews but tengo un vida y no hay tiempo!!!! (i'm trying)


    over 1 year ago