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" What did I do, Ollie? Why are you doing this?" These lines stood out to me because I think that this is all too common. Just when you think you love someone, they turn their back on you. Humanity is evil like that :/
I feel so bad fro Arabella! (I love her name!) I want to grab Ollie and beat him to a pulp!
Who or what inspired you to write this? This piece was so good, and I wish I could write something half as good!
Well done on this piece, it was absolutely amazing!!!
Always write free,