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The impression that this poem leaves on me is breath-taking. I am left with feeling exhilaration and adrenaline as if I was the bird flying,
Not at all, this is great.
"I can't remember when I realized that interesting wasn't a compliment, that ethnic didn't mean beautiful." I love this line because it's true. People tend to throw out words and phrases and the naive mind will accept is as a compliment when that's not what it is. It's just an insult in disguise.
Amazing. Honestly, the only critique I have is to make everything flow better. It's a little scattered and can be a bit confusing but all in all, it's great. Keep going with what you have and definitely build upon it until it flows greatly.
This is a really good poem and I'm glad that you wrote about this. Man, all of the poems that I've read for this competition so far are so great! Keep doing good and don't stop writing.