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I am left remembering someone who had vanish with the winter midnight breeze.
no you nailed it completely
You make this a very tough job for me and I am very lousy at tough job so here are my favorite lines.
Just copy whole poem here
this whole poem is special because you have so subtly type a particular feeling here with which many of us struggle and end up crying because we don't knoaw how to explain or express that wretched wringing movement of heart but you have does it and its marvelous
The most beautiful thing of this poetry is that it is purely real and its straight out your heart and one can clearly feel it when one read it. So keep writing in your pure form because when we are real than than we are marvel to be hold clearly explicit from your poetry but when we are someone else than we are like everybody else.
you literally made my day and where my praise may fell like flattery i really mean everything what I have written and maybe more .