almost flora kane

United States

formerly -writinginhopesofsomeday- / just a little somebody

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Message to Readers

I would love some feedback if you have any :)

A Glow

April 2, 2018

I watch on the cliff,
my mirrored reflection,
the girl I once knew,
who loved with reckless abandon.

A fire once glowed,
a light used to shine,
but the sun's radiance doesn't climb the walls,
of the prison she kept,
her heart of hearts. 

Her eyes once danced in laughter,
while her soul skipped through the stars,
but the world crashed down with the weight of the universe,
and she slowly sank into the ground,
of the silver glass shards that we're made of, 
where we littered the dirt with our broken smiles.

I sit here today,
watching the moon,
with the waves writhing below,
and echoing in my crippled soul. 

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  • Chloe_Cat

    This is great! Keep writing! You're awesome!!!

    almost 3 years ago
  • KaylaM78

    Wow this is a beautiful piece with great imagery. Keep writing!

    almost 3 years ago
  • manar

    Well, a pretty raw and beautiful piece, keep it up ;)

    almost 3 years ago
  • almost flora kane

    Thank you so much!

    almost 3 years ago
  • paperbird

    This is wonderfully written and has good rhythmic structure. Love it.

    almost 3 years ago
  • Quilling Leaves

    This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery it conveyed as I read it. I especially loved the line, "while her soul skipped through the stars." I love how you wrote the poem and the descriptives words. I like the second to last stanza.

    almost 3 years ago