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I find the idea that snorting cheese dust will kill you very unique.
I like the descriptive language used when describing Tiffony as a "single pringle". Very creative! However, I would like to have a better description of the scenario when she snorts dorito dust.
The writer shows the common confusion between eyebrows and eyelashes in society.
I would really like that one karambino. Not a great use of showing not telling, but a good laugh anyway!