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"I had been running from my own tail like a common dog." This was quite the plot twist.
It's a little humorous by the end, but it still left me intrigued. Especially the part with the painting.
Who was he? What is he now? How did he become like this? So many questions...
You really nailed the urgency in the first few paragraphs. The description of a beast, but in reality was his own tail. You've tricked my mind, and I loved how you did it, Hope to see more of your work in the future!