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'I know the sun still shines during the darkest hours
and I know people aren't as different as they appear to be,
I know behind every mask there is a story,
I know that every future is a map and that God is the cartographer.'
I love this, because even though you may not know much about the 'scientific' aspect of the world, you know about humanity. And really, isn't that what's most important? Getting to know each other, and reaching out to touch another person's heart. :)
Sometimes it's best to 'watch and learn', rather than talking. We all need to remember this. :)
A quiet calm. Knowing that even though there will be dark days, I can still be a light to someone. And other people will be there to help me up when I fall. :)
Great piece! I love how you begin almost passively, then explain more fervently exactly what you know about the world, and finally resolve the poem with calm. :)
Keep up the good work! God bless!