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Message to Readers

I don't write a lot of poetry, but this came to me last night while I was trying to sleep, and I had to write it down. I'm not sure if there's more to it or not. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Midnight Musing

March 13, 2018



Living in a warped city of lies,
Where the cracked and damaged sky,
Weeps glass down onto bent heads,
Hunched shoulders hiding under worn threads,
The shattered pavement mirrors my skin,
What kind of world is this we are dying in.


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  • Kahasai

    This is very vivid. Good job, but don't forget the question mark at the end.

    about 7 hours ago
  • Laika

    Thank you!

    4 days ago
  • RainAndSonder

    I think, in the last, "we are" would be better as "we're", but that's just my opinion. This is really amazing. Great work!

    4 days ago