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Any feedback would be fantastic. As long as someone is reading, I'm good.
"her hair is purposefully styled; she wants to hide her eyes"
I like that it reveals her personality just with that little detail.
when Ms. LaCrone said, "Burn them."
It reveals she's got some attitude as well as a few secrets to hide, which piques the readers' interest.
The interesting title drew me in.
I found her last answer particularly interesting, "falling in love" and made me want to know more about Ms. LaCrone and her thoughts.
I feel that she's a mysterious person, and more of her backstory can definitely be fleshed out in a longer story. I really liked the slightly informal setting, it set me at ease while reading.
There were a few typo errors here and there, but all in all I found it an insightful piece into her character. Nice job!