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I don't believe that the drought is over. I think that it's just getting started. It just gave us a break for a little while.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
"We all went back to driving under palm trees...shower"
This line is great because it illustrates the fact that people not only adapt after disasters; they are also quick to take advantage of a resource once they get it back. The fact that you learned from this is great, because not a lot of people learn.
I've become more conscious of water ever since I heard about the Cape Town crisis, and even though I don't live in South Africa, nor do I know anyone who lives there, the idea made me really think about how we use water in America. I live in FL, so water is also a huge issue here.
Awesome job, though it could be longer. That's just me, though.