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I don't believe that the drought is over. I think that it's just getting started. It just gave us a break for a little while.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
The very first. It captured my attention quickly. Great hook.
Where I live it constantly rains and snows. I knew about droughts in many places, but I haven't considered droughts in the US. I know about the Dust Bowl and things like that but it doesn't seem real until you hear about it happening in your time.