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Raiquia

Singapore

I am a 17 year old student that aims to pursue a career in screenwriting or writing in the future when I grow up. I especially wish to help those who are depressed

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Hello. I write based off a lot of events that really occur to me, and most of the time I do my best to translate it into my poems and stories, as a form of venting and escape from the reality of pain. I like to think that people can enjoy my works and feel my world from my perspective through my writing.
Thank you to anyone who has read my works so far
I do hope you continue to support and give your reviews so that I may improve upon myself.

Thank you very much

Last Breath

November 6, 2015

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Save your last breath for me
When you close your eyes and remember our tree
Where we carved our names and drew a heart
That was when our relationship would start

Tired and old you are,
as you lie on the hospital bed, 
dreaming of becoming a star,
I dread the day i'll see you dead.

I will never forget our promises of love
to stay together in sickness and in health is what we told God above.
I will never leave you alone here in the dark
I shall be your light, your bright little spark.

So while you're peacefully closing your eyes to rest
I want you to know that i feel blessed
To have known you for all these years
Of course i will shed some tears

                       As you leave me now, and leave me forever
                       I heard you last breath, your last whisper.
                       I love you.
                       . 

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  • raiyabb

    OH WAIT UR CHLOE HAHAHHA ILOVEYOU


    about 2 years ago
  • raiyabb

    Hello fellow Singaporean!! Nice work here :)


    about 2 years ago