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What makes me want to read this is the fact that it is somewhat relatable, and how you start it off.
The main argument in my eyes is that people in the LGTBQ+ community need to be treated the same as everyone else.
The facts, where you got your information from is very factual. Not only are you telling your opinion, but you're also informing everyone who is reading this.
I don't think anything is missing from it. You have convinced me enough as it is.
Keep up your writing, this is very factual and very well wrote.
I support 100%, bring this forward to many people with so many facts is seriously needed. The LGBTQ+ community needs to be treated just like everyone else is. In my opinion, I think it would be awesome if the government would allow people who are apart of the community to be apart of our government. Great job on this.