I have loved creative writing since I was little, and I am always looking for more ways to share and get feedback on my writing... This seems like the perfect place!
This is the beginning of a story that I might want to develop more, and I would love feedback on how you like it and if it is interesting. I am a little bit worried that the outcome was a bit to predictable, so if you have any suggestions that would be much appreciated. I also love constructive criticism! Anything that helps :)... and if you have a better title suggestion I am open to changing it.
Written By: PunkyMonkey
November 5, 2015