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The characterisation of the woman leaves a great impact on the reader as someone who is brewing in strength, ready to be harnessed. The way "her footsteps were strong and measured" and how "her eyes said queen" really represent the admirable side of this character as someone who is able to still exhibit qualities of resilience and determination despite her circumstances. This description of her walking strongly demonstrates these characteristics.
"She hardly made a sound as she walked and despite the heavy chain around her neck, she carried her head high glaring at her captures." This sentence was evocative and really brought out the stride of the character. It sticks out because it's climatic.
This was a well-defined and developed response to the Walking prompt that explores how our travels reflect who we are. Your grammar and punctuation could be fine tuned to enhance the technicality of your piece and clarify certain areas but aside from that, there is really strong writing demonstrated in this description.
Your approach to the prompt is one with creativity and intense representation. I would also suggest considering to explore other sensory details in your piece as I have noticed that texture and visuals are where your descriptions mainly form from. Consider exploring taste and scent more in depth and interweaving them within your description to create dimension to an already intricate piece.
I hope my review can assist you in developing your piece and I look forward to seeing more of your work on WTW. Happy writing!