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Message to Readers
This piece has been bothering me for a long time. At first, I thought it was because of the personal nature of it but than I realized: I hadn't properly emphasized some of the disturbing cultural norms this piece touches on. I needed to revise and say what really needed to be said.
"Girls, having a relationship with someone, especially a physical one, is every bit as much about you as it is about him." It's so true!
Confidence, comfort, independence.
Where did you find this amazing guy? ;) so many guys just never ask, like you said. And see that there is this sweet, amazing guy in your life is so amazing— you go girl!
I absolutely loved this— your air of confidence and surety, knowing that having a physical relationship with a guy really is about BOTH of you. Not just him, not just you. And that we all need to have that compassion towards each other, especially when in relationships, and just stop and ASK. It's empowering! Thank you for sharing this!
Keep up the great writing! and I hope everything goes well with you and your man. :)