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PROMPT: One Sentence Story
A woman asked a troubled pale man what his problem is, "It's coming for me, it's coming, Death or Reincarnation, but I wish only if I know which one".
What is said in this one sentence story through what is left unsaid? That is, what bigger meaning are you left with from this short piece?
That we don't know what happens after death
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