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The collective voice here really unifies the piece. It makes it clear that while this group may be outcasts and misfits, they are outcasts and misfits together. They are bound to each other, unified, not needing anyone else to understand them.
I would definitely like to know more about time and setting. It wasn't very clear while I was reading what was going on and where it was taking place. After a little while, I picked up on a post-apocalyptic world, then then near the very end, some kind of virus. Suddenly near the end your story takes a turn where it seems less about this band of misfits and more as if it's going to lead off into something about this virus. I'd like to know more about that, for certain.
While your piece was interesting, I had a hard time understanding the trajectory. At first it seemed like it was about a band of outcasts, frowned upon by society, then it seemed to be about a virus. I was a little unclear on where it was going.
Overall, well done, very intriguing, and with a few edits this could really shine. Nice job.