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"And there it was. A bright red glistening balloon, a translucent string attatched, floating above the street of chaos." I really like this, because it really shows the innocence of little children, who get mesmerized by little things like a red balloon.
Wow... An ice storm and a red balloon. I really liked how you made the balloon seem like a little thing that can overcome big obstacles. It was really good!
This was a great piece! I really love the character, and the ending. Very powerful. Keep writing these pieces!