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I really like the lines such as "How to make a wonderful ramen bowl," and "you cannot do anything without being born." These show the reader how bluntly and humorously you write, and they made me laugh. Great job!
Umm... happy, I guess. This made me smile and laugh, and it was fun and entertaining to read. Seems like the kind of children books you used to read as a kid if you know what I mean. The kind that is made to make people smile and laugh. Kudos :)
I would ask: How do you come up with this stuff?! You're really good, and it seems like the most random thing you take from your brain and make it hilarious. Great job, I love reading your stuff! Second question: Are you going to continue this? Becuase I look forward to it if you do.
Your voice comes out very clearly in your writing, and you've enriched it with humor, which some take a long time TRYING to do. I enjoy how casual and natural your words are, and enjoy reading every bit of it. Though, you may want to work a bit on your wording. Some of your sentences could be improved a bit, by following the basic rules of sentence flow. Of course, that's just me. Keep writing and God bless! ;3