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I wondered what a Chenquin was, and decided to check it out.
from the story the chenquin seems like a water spirit that lures children into the ocean, and strikes when rain falls.
Can the Chenquin be seen either by children alone or everyone? Can it communicate with the children?, or is it just compulsion? I'm just curious.
It's a good monster to be created. It's ranked up there with the possible stories told to children to keep them indoors.
It's a good believable story in the monster genre.