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Message to Readers
Any feedback you could give would be greatly appreciated.
I think that you did a great job with leaving where she is and what she feels up to the reader. It leaves me questioning and imagining.
I would tell them about the creativity of this piece, and the way that it will allow them to create their own story.
This is awesome Lex. You did a great job with this, and it stands out as different from other responses. One thing is that this isn't really a story, but a beginning. Your sentence doesn't tell a story or imply a meaning. I really liked the way you kept your six words simple and basic, leaving plot, character, and everything else up to the reader.