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'No one to mourn the knowledge, courage, and wisdom that the world lost through this noble creature’s death.' - This made me sad. Yes, perhaps this dragon had done bad things in his life, but he still had wisdom. At least he had one more chance to pass on his wisdom before leaving the world behind.
Sad, and a strange feeling to listen to those who have lived longer than I have. ;) I mean, honestly, I do that all the time because I read the Bible. But books are also different than people, and thank you for reminding me to listen to my parents and those older than I am. And yet in whatever wisdom I gain, I must match it up with what God says in His Word.
Why did you decide to write about a dragon? :) (Fantastical creatures are often the funnest to write about because they're so unknown). ;)
Excellent! I love the moral you provide behind this. Great job!