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The second line brings out what Australia looks like. I imagine a dry field, and one little twig holding up a cicadas, who's singing in the dim light of the sun that's passing over the earth before it rests beneath the hills.
But obviously, I used more than ten words. ;)
You did a great job describing where you live in only ten words! That's hard to do.
Barrenness. That's just the picture I get. Loneliness also, to some extent. And obviously heat. ;)
You did a great job on this! Great descriptions!