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Message to Readers
I would like feedback on my diction and organization.
"It’s hard to say what exactly I’d bring, because when you live in America, you tend to forget how privileged you are." This line stood out to me the most because I realized that you were right.
After reading this I feel grateful for all of the things that I used to not notice that I have in my life.
What would you take?
You could make the title Refugee or Privilege . I feel that this titles help to summon what point you are trying to get across.