CreativeAngel

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The Land of Magic

February 7, 2018

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Oh how i wish,
To use the red rose of the fish,
That swims in the pond waiting for food,
By the so called prince Dude,
I travel along the path,
Of the blue sapphires and the witch's wrath,
The small bunnies,
Coming to ask for protection for the monkeys,
That follow with there long tails,
And then protection is given for the monkeys fails,
The red rose the fish gave to me,
And the magic castle i see,
Far away but bright red like the rose,
I see horses doing talent shows,
Along the way of the path i took,
I found the witch with a spell book,
I commanded,
She demanded,
A payment of the rose i had,
And i gave it up oh so sad,
I took the spell book in my hands,
And traveled across the very lands,
Beneath my feet the land churned,
I hurried along before i burned,
In the sun's rays of fire,
Oh that rose i still desire, 
But the witch has it and it is far behind,
I work on solutions to problems that are in my mind,
I run ahead on the blue sapphire path of doom,
And reach the castle entering a room,
I race across the knights,
And i see the windows showing all the sights,
Below me the land is magic,
But soon it will turn tragic,
If i don't return the spell book to its owner,
Then everyone will end up being a blood donor,
I continue my search for the queen,
Who asked for the book through the tv screen,
I race to the bedroom and give her the book she wants,
And i have saved the world from the horror haunts.

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6 Comments
  • CreativeAngel

    Lol thanks for adding it


    almost 2 years ago
  • FairNoble

    *adds to Literary Magazine* I think it could use a little something... maybe it's a Stick, or is it just me... Oh well.


    almost 2 years ago
  • FairNoble

    *adds to Literary Magazine* I think it could use a little something... maybe it's a Stick, or is it just me... Oh well.


    almost 2 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Thank you! I saw another poem that was really long with this rhyming scheme so i decided to write one really long poem. And i felt magical at the time. At least i think so <3


    almost 2 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    Thinking..


    almost 2 years ago
  • mrcolinredwards@gmail.com

    I like this poem, how did you come up with it?


    almost 2 years ago