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Message to Readers
Please do check my writings. Suggestions and Reviews are highly appreciated. Thank you.
"As the wind blows, I instantly close my eyes, Only hearing the sounds of flying flies, I`m happy and contented in this way." This is super pretty, the last line is a little off for the pattern, but this part is amazing and I can relate to it completely.
I feel wistfulness.
It tells me what inspired it so I can't ask that question...What was the hardest part of this poem?
You can ignore all my punctuation notes if you don't like the way they look. This is a really pretty poem, you wrote it well.