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Message to Readers
is this too abstract?
I'm not very religious but I always thought that prayers should be more about what you feel than whether it makes sense - and for me, this was wonderful in the sense that I felt peace and gratitude while reading it.
A feeling that the world is bigger and brighter and that I'm excited for what is to come. I'm also reminded to stay thankful for the simple things and that we have so many reasons to be happy in life. :)
This was for me a startling spot of timelessness and gratitude that took me momentarily away from the busy day-to-day life. I'm so glad you wrote this! I enjoyed reading the poetic metaphors and I did feel a tad brighter after reading this piece.
Keep up the good work and happy writing!!