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this is a very personal piece of writing to me. i hope you enjoy it and to those of you who are going through the same thing- you are not alone.
'But I'll let you know one thing, I'm not afraid anymore.' - Beautiful!! Such a powerful ending! Throughout this entire piece, you're showing us the times when anxiety has won. And then, triumph! You have conquered it. This is also such a relatable piece as everyone has moments like this. Ending are often hard to do, but you nailed this one. :)
Triumph. :) Confidence, exaltation, joy. You have conquered your anxiety. It is so satisfying when we accomplish something. :)
What thoughts went through your mind as you wrote this? I know that whenever I'm writing, my passion gets roaring, and normally subtle feelings rise to the surface. ;)
Excellent, excellent job! I love the confident ending. And the emotions you show within the piece are so relatable.
Very well done!