NoorieNoor

Norway

I am a sixteen-year-old girl from Norway. I love writing poetry and reading others' work. I've written since I was twelve and I am excited to improve even further.

Message to Readers

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The stars and sky intertwined with a simple soul

January 21, 2018

FREE WRITING

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Lie down and watch until the beauty of sundown leaves 
Watch until the sky turns crystal clear, and the speckled stars begin to shine
What can you see? Do you see the darkness between the stars?
Or do you see the illuminance of millions of stars from west to east, from north and south?
Do you see stars that are deceased?
Or do you realize that the birth of stars explodes in front of your eyes?

Do you feel as if there is nothing left but darkness?
Or do you feel as if there is an unlimited amount of light ahead?
Do you forget about the bright moon, or is it all you can see?
Are the darker spots on the moon more interesting to look at?
Whatever it is that you see, remember that without the light from the moon, you would not see colors at this moment

Colors that make up this universe need light, so, please watch the moon with grace.
Remember the colors you have seen when you go to bed.
The eye color you have might resemble a piece of the universe, somewhere far away.
The blood of yours has things from outer space, things that you don't realize exist.
Can you feel a connection when you look up at the sky?
A connection that warms your body through the midnight
Knowing that you are underneath the moonlight.

Let go of reality, time and responsibilities for a minute
When your shoulders feel calm, take an eternity to think
Because once you have pieced up the pieces you see, you might not only feel a connection with the stars and sky
You might feel another connection with yourself.


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  • NoorieNoor

    @Gabriel Goodwin I can't thank you enough! Thank you so much. I just appreciate the fact that this writing of mine managed to inspired an amazing person like you. Thank you


    over 2 years ago
  • .audrey michelle.

    I absolutely loved this piece! You are a gifted writer who knows how to capture the moment. Thank you for this piece!!!


    over 2 years ago
  • Gabriel Goodwin

    This is beautiful beyond words! I am crying with joy!!!


    over 2 years ago
  • NoorieNoor

    @creativeangel AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH that's an amazing comment, I'm so happy you liked this piece


    almost 3 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    This is amazingly well written! You can totally become a writer/novelist when you grow up if you wanted to! <3


    almost 3 years ago