Peer Review by Kaitlyn ❄ (United States of America)()

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dance and moonlight

By: Thespian


The night is cold yet I am warm.
​the moon is my only light
the beat of my feet on the snow covered asphalt
​the beat of my heart in time with the music
dancing down the street, out of time- feeling as if I was in a music video
​happy?
I think so
I do what i love and i take no answers.
​when you can do a perfect arabesque it sums up my mood
if I can't, leave me alone 
​I will steal the snow stuck to my trainer 
I will take the time
to practice my skills 
​to have a brighter February, March, April and June
 


Peer Review

Well the title says "dance and moonlight." I think that is exactly what it is about and yet in a very metaphorical sense. I love that about it. It is so cleverly written.


I would definitely say the metaphorical sense of this entire piece. It was amazing. I felt so sucked into this piece. The beat was phenomenal. The poetry was so sweet.


"the beat of my feet on the snow covered asphalt
​the beat of my heart in time with the music
dancing down the street, out of time- feeling as if I was in a music video" The beat of it was so beautiful and the rhythm was gorgeous. I also love the music video mention. I'd love to be in a music video lol.


It's a happy, nostalgic, hopeful, and beautiful tone. Your words were chosen so perfectly.


A rather nostalgic feeling.


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