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I'm Like a Bird and So Are You

By: JudyG


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I’m like a bird,
I only fly away.
I never know where my soul is,
I never know where my heart is.
I only know how to fly away.
I fly away from danger,
I fly away from those who are stronger,
And even those who are weaker.
I am not a scavenger,
I am not a stranger,
I am you.
And you are me.
We are the birds who only fly away.

 


Peer Review

We are the birds that fly away because this is literally reality.


Amazingly happy.


Where do you think this stuff from?


Reviewer Comments

BEAUTY