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Message to Readers
just tell me however you're feeling whilst reading, open to any criticisms, i hope you enjoy :)
Peer Review
Every fight becomes a war because i feel like that is very true in reality.
I feel quiet and shy again but upbeat still.
Where is your inspiration from?
Reviewer Comments
I love how you rhyme some things but not everything!