Writer's love (poetry)

By: NuHa

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Colours of love fading away
Day by day you're going away
Objections over objections nothing was left that couldn't keep us apart
From this material world I want my soul to depart
Love and lust got me so confused
I chose you but the correct guy was refused
They say if a writer falls in love with you, you can never die
But ask me how love and frustration both bleeds through the ink
How every thing ends within a blink.....
~Nuha

Message to Readers

Hey yaa all actually I'm just a 16 yr old ordinary brown girl delivering my thoughts to all of you guys through poetries and writings hope you guys will love and admire my pieces also do give me reviews ✌ peace ✌

Peer Review

What line stands out to you the most? Why?

'Love and lust got me so confused.' This line stands out to me because I feel the same way.

What feeling are you left with after finishing this piece?

I'm left feeling in awe.

If you could ask the author one question about writing this piece, what would it be?

I this how you look at the world from a writer's perspective?

Reviewer Comments

I love this! You are soooo talented!