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Give Up?

January 17, 2018


I give up,
No i can't,
I must stay strong,
And keep believing,
But when all hope is lost,
How can you possibly believe?

I can't give up,
My friends support,
They admire,
I have a tiny bit,
Of baby hope,
But is that useless?

I give up,
Oh what shall i do,
I can't think straight,
I am nervous and moving,
Angels have descended,
Encouraging to go on,
But is that enough?

I will never give up,
Trying will help,
Mistakes i learn from,
Successions i praise,
Giving up would mean i lose,
And i could never afford to do anything but win,
I have decided,
No matter what happens,
That i will never give up,
Even after my last breath.


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  • CreativeAngel

    Yup, since i was actually ready to give up

    over 3 years ago
  • camlily

    This is so inspiring <3

    over 3 years ago