camlily

United States

hi there

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what up fam I’m back from like a four month break
most of my pieces are really personal so yeah I’m sorry if you read any of them
been here since 2017 with my besties FairNoble and CreativeAngel <3
just a girl trying to get rid of writers block
I hope that you have an absolutely splindiferous day! :)
If y'all want me to check out a piece or peer review it, let me know in the comments of one of my pieces and I'll do my best to get it done

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Dear Brother

January 17, 2018

FREE WRITING

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Dear Brother,
Do you remember 
When we played
Outside in the woods?
When you and I 
Loved each other.  
When I and you
Were happy.

Of course,
That was before 
The computer stole you away.

Not a day goes by 
Where I don't hear you
Cursing at the screen.
Your poor fingers 
Jamming into the keyboard.
Your head
Filled with anger 
And violence.

Dear Brother,
Do you see how much you've changed?
How much it hurts us?
Dear Brother, 
I want you back.
 
the only thing he does all day is stare at his computer.

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  • Glytch Montoya

    *piece


    almost 3 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    And the subject of the peace actually has nothing to do with it. The explanation is in the footnote.


    almost 3 years ago
  • Glytch Montoya

    ...I...
    I, uh...
    ...
    (inhales deeply)
    ...I'M AFRAID MY BROTHER AND I ARE BOTH THOSE BROTHERS! WE ALWAYS GET ANGRY WHEN VIDEO GAMES DON'T GO OUR WAY AND MY SISTER ABSOLUTELY HATES THAT AND I... I... I...
    ...
    Sorry, I'm in an emotional state. To find out why, read my most recent piece... Be warned, it's supposed to be emotional...


    almost 3 years ago
  • camlily

    aww :( :(


    almost 3 years ago
  • CreativeAngel

    My brother completely. And if he's not on the computer he is screaming like a maniac and is calling names to everyone. Not a good sight. We used to love each other as kids but not anymore. We have baby pictures of us sitting together looking cute and all but now we won't even stand next to each other for a picture.


    almost 3 years ago
  • camlily

    So true!!! I can relate :)


    almost 3 years ago
  • JadeAndSerpentine

    I totally feel you. Except my brother, in addition to always being on his iPad, he refuses to hug or kiss me or my sister.

    Except here I am, staring at my computer. At least it's for a worthwhile cause...


    almost 3 years ago